PMI-POSITIVE-MINUS-INTERESTING For Our Movie

POSITIVE	MINUS	INTERESTING
Great Acting.	People not getting there clothes ready.	Get to enter the I am making movies.
Nice script.	Did not match the army type.	To also get more confident to make more movies
Tried hard to not laugh		might win a prize and go up on stage
Cool guns

It’s finally time to record parts of our movies. We got all of our parts done, I used to have my own group until I had to write the script all by myself. It’s frustrating. Instead of that I joined the bravery and heart group.

We were doing fine until the other people in our group did not bring their clothes so they couldn’t record until they brang their costume. In our group is Waata, Darius, Gabriel, Crusader, Rauf, Jacob and me .

Did you want to know why are we doing this??? Because we are entering I Am Making Movies and if we win we will win a video camera.

I might write if we win or if we lose but it’s not all about winning it’s about having fun and doing something. This feels cool to enter a competition because I am feeling really confident.

This Is My PMI and paragraphs

“It’s finally time to record parts of our movies.We got all of our parts done,I use to have my own group until I had to write the script all by myself.It’s frustrating.Instead of that I joined the bravery and heart group.


Were doing fine until the other people in our group did not bring there clothes so they could’t record until there brang there costume.In our group are Waata,Darius,Gabriel,Crusader and me Wyatt,Rauf and Jacob.Did you want to know why are we doing this??? Because we are entering I Am Making Movies and if we win we will win a video camera.

I might write if we won or if we lost but it’s not all about winning it’s about having fun and doing something.This feels cool to enter a competition.Because I am really confident.

Whats Chewing Gum???

In 1872 in America a man called Adam Smith worked in a factory and found a piece of chicle.For fun he popped it in his mouth and chewed on it until he said “it’s still whole”.

Adam thought of a great idea to heat up the chicle and add mint flavouring.He wanted to make money out of it.But shop owners refused to sell it.

So the tutti fruity company excepted it and sold it in slot machines. People could now buy it at railway stations.

Soccer!,SOCCER!!,SOCCER!!!

Yes!!! It’s my soccer game today. My team the Avatars are vs Manukau. I think we're going to lose like always. But I just want to win one game. So I started getting ready for the game still hoping to win
My mum (the coach) said we had to do some warm ups until the man on the other side said “Okay game time.”
"Set out formation," I shouted. Then the ref blew the whistle. Off I went I. got the ball and I went side to side swerving it pass them. My team I almost got a goal. Were we going to win this game?

“BEEP”went the whistle. I was very energized for the second halfSo much that I was running so hard to get one goal and more. My dad said “Get back in there and do your best and also try to get a goal"

“Are you all ready” said the ref
“YES” we all shouted, "Beep!" Rushing to the ball I almost got another goal I sure we were going to win this game.
All of a sudden this boy from the other team got a goal. I was shocked. After 10 minutes they got another goal after another go.... only because we had no subs and they had 3. So yet we lost again but I'll still hope to win the next game.Who will we vs next???