“Creakkkk” the wooden floor went when I ran across the other side, I slammed the door shut.My annoying sister wouldn't give the Ipad back. I decided to look in the basement for some old junk I could play with. I stumbled across a chest. It was the long-lost chest from my great grandad’s dad “ A Pirate.”
“I have to keep this quiet” I whispered. I have to find the key. “Look,a map” I said. It was underneath the chest. “It looks like it outside” It was Just laying there, the key from the treasure chest. On the Grass.....
Hey Wyatt,
ReplyDeleteYour story deffinately has me wondering what you'd find in the chest. You might want to watch out with your punctuation, make sure you have a space after full stops and commas.
Great work, Keep writing :) Mr. Hutchings